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fate · Uber-Karma Joined: 11 Sep 2003 Posts: 1178

i was thinking of new things to do for otakon or in general and I remembered the short story(ha!) i wrote to use as script for a short manga(some of you may have read this)....

problem is i can't write

therefore I come to ask if anyone here would be interested in rewriting it to make it...uh...not suck a lot

thar be moneys in it for you..and monkeys...maybe...
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Jastermereel · Guest

I'd be willing to read it over (might have before) and make suggestions and give advice, but I don't have much in the way of writing ability either. Passing on the job, offering friendly aid.

Corgren · Good Luck Joined: 12 Sep 2003 Posts: 149

I'd be willing to give it a shot, but dialogue is probably my weakest point...

How long is the story? Maybe you could post a page of it (page by comic length, not text) and whoever can mess around and se what comes up.
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Katrina · Good Karma Joined: 11 Oct 2003 Posts: 215 Location: Uranus

Huh? How did I miss this post when it came up? I'd *love* to help re-write it, if you're still looking for re-writing. I've been kinda bugging for the chance to try and do a writing request. No moneys or monkeys nessesary. ^_^ (I've had enough of monkeys since insanse DK bongo game...)

PM or e-mail me with more info.

-Katrina
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fate · Uber-Karma Joined: 11 Sep 2003 Posts: 1178

i think tami's taken this up a while ago unless my memory is worse then i remember
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Katrina · Good Karma Joined: 11 Oct 2003 Posts: 215 Location: Uranus

Ah, okay. My fault for not checking. Embarassed

If she backs out or if you have something else you want me to try, let me know. Wink

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