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Posted: Wed Mar 17, 2004 8:09 pm Post subject: Cor's Artsness thread |
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On the family computer, so I can't get to the astylar.qualityimporting FTP... But I finally got off my arse and openned a couple hosting accounts; DeviantART for the exposure, Photobucket for the:
http://img37.photobucket.com/albums/v115/corgren/chiangbot1.jpg
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DevArt: one or two w/nudity, not so work-safe
Photobucket: all clean
I've got PS and my tablet on this comp, when my dad isn't looking <_< So I've been working on the pic above and a piece inspired by Anna's drawing last weekend (and using the rest of the outfit I designed then). The pic's cropped, and the colors are just for working, not final, which is why they look kinda weird.
http://img37.photobucket.com/albums/v115/corgren/pifae1.jpg _________________ "Instead, it has always been there. I found it during the CT scan last year, when the mummy was lifted. It lay loose in the sand around the king's body. It was mummified," Zahi Hawass, chief of Egypt's Supreme Council of Antiquities, told Discovery News.
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Posted: Fri Mar 19, 2004 12:34 am Post subject: |
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Actually I think most of the FTP accounts has to be reset. The hosting service has been really screwy.
I apologize. _________________ "My Heart Is In the Work" - Andrew Carnegie |
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Posted: Fri Mar 19, 2004 5:47 am Post subject: |
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nifty can't wait to see what u do when u make ur own site...hehehe
the fairy is comming out nicely must post when finished...also u gona add background to it? _________________ The most exciting phrase to hear in science, the one that heralds new discoveries, isn't 'Eureka!' but rather 'hmm....that's funny.'
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Posted: Fri Mar 26, 2004 3:39 pm Post subject: ! |
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Wasn't trying to be rude... far as I knew, I had replied a week ago... Guess the board ate another post? Somebody hasn't been sending their sacrifice!
rklee: Can't do FTP on this compuuter anyway. Thus, sites with HTTP-type uploads...
Trool: All in good time (meaning never, of course ). Got some more work done on the fairy, but nothing enough to post. BG is gonna be a bird's-eye view of a ship, top of the mast right next to her.
New stuff: couple of attempts a speedpainting, but took a little too long for that. Turned out not too bad anyway.
http://img37.photobucket.com/albums/v115/corgren/merharp.jpg
http://img37.photobucket.com/albums/v115/corgren/shippie.jpg _________________ "Instead, it has always been there. I found it during the CT scan last year, when the mummy was lifted. It lay loose in the sand around the king's body. It was mummified," Zahi Hawass, chief of Egypt's Supreme Council of Antiquities, told Discovery News.
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rather nifty ship design i like the glow that seems to come from it...how big is that thing supposed to be... _________________ The most exciting phrase to hear in science, the one that heralds new discoveries, isn't 'Eureka!' but rather 'hmm....that's funny.'
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Wasn't thinking about size too much as I made it, but judging by the portholes on the side... something like 10 decks tall, 100 meters long? (In front, that's a large canopy over the bridge, not a cockpit.) _________________ "Instead, it has always been there. I found it during the CT scan last year, when the mummy was lifted. It lay loose in the sand around the king's body. It was mummified," Zahi Hawass, chief of Egypt's Supreme Council of Antiquities, told Discovery News. |
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http://img37.photobucket.com/albums/v115/corgren/drogg3.jpg
Gonna be lazy and just copy over the devart description:
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I dunno about this one - it looks kinda spiffy at first, IMO, but there's plenty of mistakes because I didn't consider the anatomy very carefully... The idea was a potential evolution of dragons, that adapted to life in the sea (like mosasaurs did) and pretty much lost their wings.
It's the back leg that bothers me the most, I suppose - that musculature's no good for swimming. I might fix it if I ever CG it. |
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I'm not on DeviantART that much so I wouldn't know if you copied it or not. (But now I do!! Bwa-ha-ha!)
*returns to sanity* Anyways, all of these are really nice. I like the mermaid-looking one a lot (probably because I like mermaids.. ) The pterodactl (sp??) shows a look of really amazing detail. A lot of online artists are good at computer coloring, but not as many at just old-fashioned pencil drawing.
Online art galleries are a great way to make people aware of your work. As soon as you get a regular website, definatly start linking it from these sites. ![Wink](images/smiles/icon_wink.gif) _________________ Check it out! I finally remembered my login for this account. I can do crazy things like put text in my signature and change my avatar so it doesn't say NaNoWriMo 2005. |
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Posted: Sat Apr 10, 2004 9:21 am Post subject: |
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Mermaids are fun to, er, "design" because there are plenty of variables to play around with - how do they breath, swim, etc., and there's al sorts of weird-looking critters in the sea for inspiration.
As for the dragon-thing, I was going into it thinking about how to put more detail in, keeping one or two of my own favorite artists in mind. It started out as a smaller sketch (about 4" wide), then I printed it out in red only (to delete with the scanner) full-page and redrew it.
website: GRUUAAARGHHH! _________________ "Instead, it has always been there. I found it during the CT scan last year, when the mummy was lifted. It lay loose in the sand around the king's body. It was mummified," Zahi Hawass, chief of Egypt's Supreme Council of Antiquities, told Discovery News. |
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ooo i like the dragon he has this kinda old, but nice look going for him...neat, just one question y does the tail bulge like that at the tip...that part threw me off a bit.... _________________ The most exciting phrase to hear in science, the one that heralds new discoveries, isn't 'Eureka!' but rather 'hmm....that's funny.'
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< has just realized that that is in fact a tail and not a seperate weird flying creature.....>damn _________________ People's whole lives do pass before their eyes before they die. The process is called living.
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Trool: That's a paddle, for swimming - it's flat. Comments I've gotten elsewhere pointed that out as a problem, and I'm gonna make it clearer.
fate: o_O _________________ "Instead, it has always been there. I found it during the CT scan last year, when the mummy was lifted. It lay loose in the sand around the king's body. It was mummified," Zahi Hawass, chief of Egypt's Supreme Council of Antiquities, told Discovery News. |
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nice she looks good, u working on new comic? what's it about? _________________ The most exciting phrase to hear in science, the one that heralds new discoveries, isn't 'Eureka!' but rather 'hmm....that's funny.'
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It's an idea I've had for a couple years now, that I was a while back gonna maybe work on with another Megatokyo-forums artist.
*Cor pokes the grammar, then decides not to mess with it*
Er, summary? Typical sci-fi epic, aliens, galactic wars, a bit of time travel thrown in... It's definately straightforward genre material, though I'm really developing the world behind it. Kinda like Dune in that respect. _________________ "Instead, it has always been there. I found it during the CT scan last year, when the mummy was lifted. It lay loose in the sand around the king's body. It was mummified," Zahi Hawass, chief of Egypt's Supreme Council of Antiquities, told Discovery News. |
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Posted: Sat May 08, 2004 3:47 am Post subject: And another... |
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**pic deleted due to cleaning** _________________ "Instead, it has always been there. I found it during the CT scan last year, when the mummy was lifted. It lay loose in the sand around the king's body. It was mummified," Zahi Hawass, chief of Egypt's Supreme Council of Antiquities, told Discovery News.
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< pokes you for so many sketchy lines > _________________ People's whole lives do pass before their eyes before they die. The process is called living.
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Posted: Sun May 09, 2004 7:52 am Post subject: |
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*holds up art to defend self*
Just a study, really, done in about an hour at Valley Forge:
http://img37.photobucket.com/albums/v115/corgren/forgarch.jpg
The pic from last night. I'd clean up her arms if I ever intended to work on this again, though I'd look up some ref on them first:
http://img37.photobucket.com/albums/v115/corgren/com/nika_semiquick.jpg _________________ "Instead, it has always been there. I found it during the CT scan last year, when the mummy was lifted. It lay loose in the sand around the king's body. It was mummified," Zahi Hawass, chief of Egypt's Supreme Council of Antiquities, told Discovery News.
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Very nice - it looks very clean. (Cool to see it how it came out.) I need to put a little *more* sketching into my pics, I think. _________________ Check it out! I finally remembered my login for this account. I can do crazy things like put text in my signature and change my avatar so it doesn't say NaNoWriMo 2005. |
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ooo i like the nature scene it seems like much more traditional art then i've seen from u before. The girl is good too, much less scetchy lines lol....sorry... ![Laughing](images/smiles/icon_lol.gif) _________________ The most exciting phrase to hear in science, the one that heralds new discoveries, isn't 'Eureka!' but rather 'hmm....that's funny.'
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Posted: Wed May 12, 2004 1:31 pm Post subject: |
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Katrina: It's not so much trying to put sketchiness in, as taking time to find the right lines... Drawing is in a way inherently wrong, because it's line instead of bulk and flat instead of round. You aren't always goind to find the right "translation" on your first go.
Trool: It's pretty rare for me, but I've been doing a bit more lately... The opportunity was kinda obvious this time, 'cause we were there for a mother's day picnic, and my parents went off walking. _________________ "Instead, it has always been there. I found it during the CT scan last year, when the mummy was lifted. It lay loose in the sand around the king's body. It was mummified," Zahi Hawass, chief of Egypt's Supreme Council of Antiquities, told Discovery News. |
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Posted: Tue May 25, 2004 3:15 pm Post subject: _-` |
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Stuffs.
Sleep. _________________ "Instead, it has always been there. I found it during the CT scan last year, when the mummy was lifted. It lay loose in the sand around the king's body. It was mummified," Zahi Hawass, chief of Egypt's Supreme Council of Antiquities, told Discovery News. |
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oooo nice pics the kitty girl looks nifty, i like her tail...the jumping girl looks pretty good to, but i'm not sure what, but something doesn't look quiet right...though i can't say what it is...sorry for lack of help... _________________ The most exciting phrase to hear in science, the one that heralds new discoveries, isn't 'Eureka!' but rather 'hmm....that's funny.'
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Several comments on the top picture I think this might be why max says it doesn't look quite right. I think the hip is very narrow proportionally. Her left arm/sholder is also kinda funky I think I know what angle it's supposed to be but I tugess the clothing folds or something not sure make it look not so good. "foreshortening"?? I dunno. I also think the crotch area is kinda funky.
Is that a funky pulley type design on the leg clothing of the multiarmed girl?
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Trool: Yeah, there's some things off there, mostly her upper arms - they're poorly done so hard to figure out, and if you do it turns out they're poorly posed in the first place
rklee(adapted from IM, for anbody else who was thinking same things): She was supposed to be a bit on the slimmer side, thus the hips ... Her boobies should be smaller, and will be ... Arms are wierd, need to figure that out in front of a mirror ... And maybe put on long clothes to figure out the folds ...
Not pulleys, straps and buckles. I should change the shapes to non-disks, I guess _________________ "Instead, it has always been there. I found it during the CT scan last year, when the mummy was lifted. It lay loose in the sand around the king's body. It was mummified," Zahi Hawass, chief of Egypt's Supreme Council of Antiquities, told Discovery News. |
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Posted: Wed Jul 07, 2004 4:27 pm Post subject: N?ka again |
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... yeah, the comic chara.
This is the sketch I finished the night at Miranda's house.
<img src="http://img37.photobucket.com/albums/v115/corgren/com/040706-nika1b.jpg">
The presketch, in case anybody cares _________________ "Instead, it has always been there. I found it during the CT scan last year, when the mummy was lifted. It lay loose in the sand around the king's body. It was mummified," Zahi Hawass, chief of Egypt's Supreme Council of Antiquities, told Discovery News. |
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i remmember that, nive I like ur shading. There's something interesting about her right hand that i'm not sure what, but her outfit looks funky. How far r u in ur comic? _________________ The most exciting phrase to hear in science, the one that heralds new discoveries, isn't 'Eureka!' but rather 'hmm....that's funny.'
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Besides my usual overly-bulky fingers, I think the problem with that hand is actually the arm leading into it - the angle's off b/c I didn't work it out right. I'm kinda happy with the shading myself, it's not great but it's better than I thought I could do, I don't practice it all that much. The setting is on a Dune-ish time scale, so I'm having a little fun with the designs while keeping them at least a bit utilitarian.
As for the comic, the large-scale plot is planned out as much as it will be (leaving myself some wiggle room to let things develop), and there's enough world design done that I could get started. Just need to work out the "small scale" writing, doing all that dialogue and such that I haven't worked on for ages. _________________ "Instead, it has always been there. I found it during the CT scan last year, when the mummy was lifted. It lay loose in the sand around the king's body. It was mummified," Zahi Hawass, chief of Egypt's Supreme Council of Antiquities, told Discovery News. |
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Some stuff from my computer class at school - all my other classwork is too big to scan, and I haven't bought a digicam yet...
First Illustrator project, not so happy with it now so hidden behind a link;
Final project for Illustrator, self-portrait traced over a photo;
Photoshop project - taking scanned items and arranging them into a "landscape that shows signs of human activity."
List of all the materials: plane is pliers for body, wire cutters for tail fins, nail clippers for wings, overhead light plus open scanner lid for exhaust. Sky, "treeline," and ground all have overlaid pencil textures. The treeline's shape came from a Philly Art Museum logo (the button with the gryphon on it) openned up by doing a cartesian-polar transform. The skulls are just what they look like, some little souvenier doohickey I picked up. The "fungus" is dried dragonfruit from Trader Joe's; the rest of the ground is a dinosaur bone.
Some of the scans:
And an example of what the transform does:
becomes
These were done on a mac in the lab. I know my own monitor's color is off, so I dunno how well these look anymore, but shouldn't be too bad... _________________ "Instead, it has always been there. I found it during the CT scan last year, when the mummy was lifted. It lay loose in the sand around the king's body. It was mummified," Zahi Hawass, chief of Egypt's Supreme Council of Antiquities, told Discovery News. |
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I like the self portrait one(except for the strange line across the neck there, not sure what that is)
the photomanip thing seems odd. The lighting especially. The shadows for the plane and the skulls/heads are opposite of each other and the skulls seem to be floating since their shadows imply some level of backlighting. The lighting on the skulls themselves seems off. I think maybe you were trying to get their lighting from the jet engines? If that's the case then the lighter spots should probably be higher. Something that might help the image overall would be a graying out of the areas closest to the horizon line(showing distance), it seems a bit flat right now in that respect. The other thing I notice is there seems to be a blur on the ground but not anywhere else which makes the image somewhat inconsistant.
anywho hope that helps at all. _________________ People's whole lives do pass before their eyes before they die. The process is called living.
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